No Wink...........No Blink Poem by Risha Ahmed (12 yrs)

No Wink...........No Blink

Rating: 3.2


I saw it on the top shelf
When I went to the toy store
I thought that it was sleeping
But how come it did not snore
I thought I will ask it what it was
So first I gave it a wink
But it did'nt do anything
I t did'nt even blink
So I had to call my mother
In her hand was a football
She said now don't you be foolish
Risha......that is a doll.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Leslie Ching 27 December 2008

funny...you also tried to incorperate some rhyme into your poem...well done... Leslie

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Diane Violet 27 March 2007

Lovely poem Risha, I enjoyed it very much! ! Love and Hugs, Diane

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Mahfooz Ali 27 March 2007

Hello, Risha Beta, what a nice poem u ve written. I ve become fan of urs. Bye with lots of Love. Yours, Mahfooz Uncle.

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Anna Russell 27 March 2007

This is lovely Risha, you are a very talented young lady. Top marks from me too. Hugs Anna xxx

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David Harris 27 March 2007

Risha, what a sweet poem. I just love the subtle humor you include in some of your poems. This one made me smile. Top marks from me. Thanks for sharing it Princess. David

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Risha Ahmed (12 yrs)

Risha Ahmed (12 yrs)

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