No Where To Run, No Where To Hide Poem by Natalie Clyne

No Where To Run, No Where To Hide



Fire blared around me
The flames whipping my skin
No where to run
No where to hide
Smoke chocking me
My head spinning
No where to run
No where to hide
The soles of my feet blackening
As the heat of death intensifies
No where to run
No where to hide
Try to run but my legs stay still
Ceiling and floor start to cave
No where to run
No where to hide
This is it now I bid you all goodbye

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Miranda Coffey 27 November 2005

Strong images and an even stronger presentation of them. The way you wrote it allows the reader to experience the emotions within it as well. Good job. ~miranda

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Linda Jenkinson 16 November 2005

i was drawn to the flames...good read!

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Lylyanna Pilewski 16 November 2005

wow super strong last line, I like it awesomely done. Lylyanna

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