No Where To Go Poem by Darlene Walsh

No Where To Go

Rating: 3.3


There are no roads, no where to go
i sit in silence, mind set on slow

No reason to move, there's nothing to do
much to get done, but life is all poo

Light is a rumor, i remember it once
darkness is now, i care not an ounce

Times that were good, behind a closed door
where is that key, lost there on the floor

Shrouded in darkness, cloth rough and coarse
pressure crushed heart, life never been worse

Like edge of knife, my life do shed
no want of life, do find me dead

No rainbow for me, remembrance not
nothing is left, what have i got

Who will miss me, can't think of one
once i am gone, all will be done

Tuesday, March 18, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: depression
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I wrote this when I was 13, as you can see it wasn't a happy time. The lower case I's were intended at the time, so I left them. Life has gotten MUCH better since then.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jak Black 03 January 2016

I have visited your website Darlene, and think I understand the traumas you experienced as a child, to a degree. This poem, for a thirteen year old, is exceptional. I’m happy for you that you’ve found a lasting love, long may it continue.

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we got the same style rhyms and flows wow i like this poem: Shrouded in darkness, cloth rough and coarse pressure crushed heart, life never been worse just making a sense of words that give you the streagth

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John Brown 18 March 2014

Not a happy time at all. I hope things have improved?

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Gajanan Mishra 18 March 2014

no rainbow, nothing is left, I like it. Please read my poems and comment.

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