(no Title Yet, Please Give Me Suggestions, Thanks!) Poem by I wi11 p0\/\//\/z3r j00 133715cool

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I remember a time filled
with bliss
A time that I will
always miss
We were together, just you
and me
That time has
quickly passed
I thought our friendship would
always last
Now I'm trapped and falling to
my doom
I can see my godforsaken end,
I can see it loom
I need you
here
I need you to brush away
my every tear
And now I realize, I'm falling
for you
Even I can't believe that
it's true
So save me now before
I die
Save me, before I heave
my last sigh

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Carlos Lorca 17 August 2007

I hope this is just a poem. My first girlfriend had the same name as you do, Katia Mikulak, I used to call her Katy. I don´t know you but I do hope this poem is not the way your feelings about love and live are.

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Michael Hatsko 23 March 2006

How bout.. 'Lost without you'

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Katia Mikulak 22 May 2005

How about... You are always next to me, as a title/what do you think?

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Loretta Doyle Samlley 15 May 2005

I liked it and to let you know it was good.

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Poetry Hound 25 March 2005

Okay, how about this for a title: 'My Unoriginal Losing Entry In the Sixth-Grade Poetry Contest'

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