No Other Place Poem by Brian Jones

No Other Place



Early morning I see your face
This is where I belong, No other place

Morning coffee, Waking pace
Start the day, Another rat race

Going out, Things to do
People to see, Thinking of you

Daytime ends, Night time comes
Then slumbers sweet embrace

Sleep settles in, I see your face
This is where I belong, No other place

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Grace Tan 09 February 2007

A sweet poem! Talks about a lovely affection. I like your use of repitative ornament in 'No other place', having mentioned it in both the first and last stanza as well as in the title. A simple poem with sweet command.

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