No One To Question Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

No One To Question



The liberty and freedom
Now questioned with wisdom
How long have we helped nature?
For us and generation in future

No one has an answer
We have gone so far
In the depth of natural secrets
And has many things to state

We know causes
But unaware of remedial causes
We know the glaciers are melting
And rivers remain in full spate

The earth has become hollow
With oil and gas extraction allowed
The earth plates move with tremors
Whole of man kind suffers

No one to question
And no one to mention
As liberty is main concern
The freedom shall not suffer in turn

Thursday, September 18, 2014
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 20 September 2014

Re: No one to question (Score: 1) by zbird on Friday, September 19,2014 (17: 26: 33) sadly you speak the truth in this one as freedom becomes less and less free and governments enslave us for their own purposes

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 September 2014

Beautiful Zachary Kulkin11 minutes ago A true testament to this time and age. Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 September 2014

good Mr. Awesome9 minutes ago I like how you expand to analogize the degradement you are speaking of with the entire earth falling apart, and stand for freedom no matter what gets in the way. The only punctuation in the poem is a question mark, which i like. I think the third line has a typo and should say generations. Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 September 2014

Intriguing Jaime Leal10 minutes ago Well written poem. A beautifully worded look at the state of nature in today.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 September 2014

The liberty and freedom Now questioned with wisdom

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