No More Night Poem by Marieta Maglas

No More Night

Rating: 5.0


You gave me your love,
while that night was pouring down.
I thought it was in Eden or dreams.
I could hear the rain whispering your name.
Someone had bled somewhere-
wounds to be sutured.
They weren't lips.
I had learned everything about lips.
I heard the whispers of the White Tree of Gondor.
You kissed me for
kissing, kissing, kissing.
You gave me your blue love,
and I understood that you were mine.
I had you, and I could be myself
(lips- kisses within) .
Someone had bled somewhere-
wounded lips and
sutures-
lips, kisses within.
I stand near you, touching you
and I wanted to stay that way forever.
You didn't ask me to stay
never to leave-
walls, walls, walls.
'Twas for eternity
our love.
You couldn't ask me to stay
again and again.
You gave me your love
again and again.
I waited for the blue rain to whisper
again and again,
You didn't let me wait for my rainbow
again and again,
again and again,
again and again,
again and again,
again and again.
Once more,
'twas the night.
No more,
'twas no more night.
You gave me your love.

Poem by Marieta Maglas

Wednesday, November 12, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: kiss
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Heather Wilkins 22 November 2014

you gave me your love again and again I waited for the blue rain to whisper again and again sweet words Marieta

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 19 November 2014

So passionately crafted this piece with rhyme really appeals me to read it more than twice.....Marieta......very nicely composed.....10/10

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Lyn Paul 17 November 2014

I could hear the rain whispering your name.... A beautiful line. Thank you for sharing your words

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Amitava Sur 13 November 2014

Liked your passionate love poem a lot

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Captain Herbert Poetry 13 November 2014

full of passion in your nice poem. Thank you so much for sharing your poem.. Voted 10

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Marieta Maglas

Marieta Maglas

Radauti, Judet Suceava, Romania
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