No More Mistake Poem by Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh

No More Mistake



No more mistake
No more heartbreak
In my life please
No more earthquake

No more bad dream
No more wild scream
In my life please
No more ill whim

No more sad sigh
No more bad guy
In my life please
Successful try

No more teardrop
No more song's flop
In my life please
Give love nonstop

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Erica Borges 05 October 2012

Calm down...it's ok man. Give love nonstop...that's right. God is a force that we can't comprehend...so it's silly to think the bad guys win in the end...It's like saying a glass of coke will damage the entire sea forever. Nature's been here for BILLIONS of years...coca cola's only been here a little over a century.

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Allemagne Roßmann 09 October 2012

no more in lines encore to bear as sorrows soar

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Frank (popeye) Pulver 06 October 2012

Well I know how it felt because my life was just like this a few years ago and that was lost. It took me a while before the light of my life to help get on the right life.

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Hazel Durham 06 October 2012

A heartfelt plea for no more hassle and pain. Brilliant write!

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Indranil Bhaduri 06 October 2012

A cry to get out of adverse situations in life. Nicely written..

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Lovable Wisdom 05 October 2012

This poem rendures a sad implemted on life i ownder if this is what you feel

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Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh
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