Adeline Foster

Rookie - 299 Points (Instructor of poetry, Hagerstown, MD)

~no Man Is An Island - Poem by Adeline Foster

No man is an island,
Or so I’ve heard it said.
Certain men are leaders,
And others must be led.
Let not the man who would control
Despise the lowly serf
For if there were no followers
What need of kings on earth.


Comments about ~no Man Is An Island by Adeline Foster

  • Rookie - 294 Points Daniel Y. (2/26/2014 9:36:00 PM)

    Brilliant. Beautiful and terse! The allusion is less about leadership and more about the social nature of humanity. But your poem is clearly about hierarchy. Reminds me of my poem called Chess. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 23 Points Thomas Vaughan Jones (1/27/2014 3:10:00 PM)

    I thought I was heading towards Hemingway and expected bells to be tolling. Instead I found a lovely assonant little poem, which reminded me of a saying I heard many times in the Fire Service.
    Too many chiefs and not enough indians
    Hugz (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 17,109 Points Sandra Feldman (1/8/2014 9:31:00 PM)

    Excellent! ! .
    However I do wish we could do without the corruption and abuse that comes with the dear leaders (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,515 Points Valerie Dohren (1/4/2014 3:07:00 PM)

    Great write as always Adeline, beautiful rhythm and rhyme. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 341 Points Joseph Anderson (1/4/2014 3:02:00 PM)

    A brief, but splendid write with truth written throughout.Great to see you still posting 10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, January 4, 2014

Poem Edited: Friday, January 10, 2014


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