No Light Poem by Jason Sherrill

No Light

Rating: 5.0


Life love and listfullness
full of this light
within the power of it
feeling full
floating along it's sound
going to a place of pride
living to blue skys
around the place
the soul
the heart
door is open
i travel
found the secret
return the love
bar the gate
guard the shrine
golden is the way
salvation can stay
it's all lost
gone forever
search again
where is the key
alone forever
light goes dark
he is here
run from the fright
turn and kneel
the end is nigh
look upon me
disgusted and gruntled
no man is here
i am a shell
no light
no light
no light
no

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Naseer Ahmed Nasir 10 June 2009

The intense feeling of loss is apparent. The end is a little hopeless with sustaining the same situation of hollowness. There is a crest after every downfall so hopelessness is rather very injurious to ones emotions........

0 0 Reply
Joseph Poewhit 08 June 2009

Could feel the hollowness

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success