No Depth At All Poem by Lawrence S. Pertillar

No Depth At All



You wanna play head games,
And I ain't gonna 'trip' like that.
Shallow, insecure hide and seek...
In the hopes to attract a playmate,
Willing to compete.

These 'acts' of innocence,
Are cute to say the least.
However,
For someone your age...
This shows your have no depth at all.
Or anything worthy to find OR keep!

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Lawrence S. Pertillar 23 February 2007

I am often intrigued by those who hide behind pseudonyms and make declarations they feel are profound... and substantial. And for this we all pay a price! I thank you for your comments.

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poetry lover 23 February 2007

you have no depth at all, yes we know cheers!

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