Night Walk Poem by subodh pandey

Night Walk

Rating: 5.0


The lengthening shadows of the figures
slowly merge with the dark of night,
in the oblivious distinction
you cling to the extreme periphery of an
ever-expanding shape,
of which your collective memories
chooses to be mute,
as if not to divulge, the secret of a childhood friend,
come what so ever.
At the stone altar you stand
hands heavenwards, protecting yourself
from the wrath of stars.
All of sudden sky is like an inverted bowl
mosaiced with the shimmering stars,
lighting the distinction with the rustiness of vice.
Your inner space is tangled with all that is
vice and novice
One overlapped by the moonlight
strolls to a walk in night.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sara Fielder 24 January 2012

This is incredibly beautiful. I sigh............

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Ananya Choudhury 22 January 2012

nice one.liked it friend..! ! ! !

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Allemagne Roßmann 22 August 2011

what so ever. At the stone altar you stand hands heavenwards, protecting yourself from the wrath of stars i love those verses....very well written and conceptualized

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Karissa Anderson 17 June 2011

great job! awesome imagery

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