Night Terror Poem by Linda Ori

Night Terror

Rating: 2.8


Running scared
Through deserted countryside
Hiding beneath the trees, breath in ragged gasps -
In the dark heavens overhead, tiny 'stars'
Begin to group and cluster;
Random laser striking electric blue, green and red
Scan above the trees and cast eerie shadows;
Looming silently overhead
Massive darkness pulsates, pulsates.
Barely breathing now, every nerve on naked edge
Waiting, waiting.
Huge explosion! Flaming meteors from heaven
Pierce the silent earth at random -
Humans running, falling, vaporized in mid stride -
Screams wrench from frozen throat -
'Help me! help me! '
Instantly aware of surroundings -
Unable to move,
Heart pounding in my ears,
Covers grasped tightly under my chin-
Silence.................. only ragged expiration - inspiration
Expiration - inspiration.
Slowly, cramped fingers release the crumpled blanket,
Deep sigh of relief..................
Only a nightmare -
Hope I didn't wake the neighbors next door!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Barry Van Allen 17 March 2007

Linda, Please, take all of your knives and such and lock them away before you go to bed! B.V.A.

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Nalini Hebbar 20 July 2006

i did look out of the window looking to see where the screams were from...forgot about the antenne...so that was you screaming! ! ! ...i was just finishing lunch...dont scream in your daydreamings...that would be midnight for me! ! ! ...lol...love...nalini

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WELL LINDA, YOU HAVE MOST CETAINLY BEEN THE EARNEST POETESS THIS EVENING, GRACING US WITH A POTPOURI OF VERSE RANGING FROM HAIKU TO DARKVERSE TO A STRINGLINE OF CONTEMPORARY AMERICAN POETRY.THIS, AS ALL THE OTHER WORKS YOU HAVE PENNED THIS EVENING HAS MADE FOR MOST PLEASUREABLE READING...NO CRITIQUE ON THIS ONE....JUST PERFECT''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FRANK/FJR

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Ray Forever 20 July 2006

Your vivid descriptions gave me a day nightmare: -)

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