Night Poem by Valerie Hutchinson-morgan

Night

Rating: 4.5


Darkness descends suddenly,
A soft ebony mantle
Covering the weary earth.
Starlight in the heavens
Glowing, glistening
Between the trees.
Standing still, rigid,
Dark silhouettes casting
Ghostly moonlit shadows
Refusing the invitation to dance
To the rhythmic chirping of crickets
Who break the silence
With a haunting tune
Which fills my mind
Imagination taking flight.
Tired eyes, deprived of peaceful slumber,
Dream of winding mountain roads
Yet to be travelled.
Littered with debris from the last storm
Obstacles waiting to be removed,
An arduous task to undertake
Before the slow, treacherous climb
To the summit can begin.

Saturday, August 8, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: night
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A peaceful night when sleep won't come. The mind turns to life's journey, the unexpected and challenges to overcome in order to accomplish desired goals.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

A creative and compelling composition that is skillfully crafted! Well done my friend!

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Chinedu Dike 02 September 2015

Beautiful train of thoughts, well articulated, nicely encapsulated, and insightfully penned with conviction. A lovely poem indeed. Thanks for sharing Valerie.

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Geoffrey Fafard 10 August 2015

good poetry…travelling with all its intricate corners -dangerous and challenging, are wrapped in this work.I like it.Just maybe it will spur me on …if nothing else then at least in my mind.great write..Ta.

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Sekharan Pookkat 09 August 2015

Night slowly entered into courtyard and veranda shadows longed to bed and drowned in dreams- thanks for sharing

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