Nice Platform Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Nice Platform



Nice platform

It is Sunday
Bright and sunny day
Go for fun
In Pen's column

Show
For trumpet to blow
Pen may find talent
That was so far absent

Nice platform
To inform
Kind world
About what your heart has told

Pen shall present
And others may comment
If you deserve
With many poets around to observe

Love to live
Among poets and believe
World is to live without guns
Air your views with great fun

For beginners
Vastness is offered
Sky may offer vastness
So show smiling face

Flowery words may appear
That shall touch near heart
It may awaken your spirit
To write more and greet

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 31 August 2014

Post nice Cody Radford21 minutes ago good one Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 31 August 2014

I feel like i'm in Pen Station Katie Rouse20 minutes ago The stanza about the trumpet really got me.Other than that it feels like a nice descriptive poem but I have a hard time finding meaning in it. Good use of structure though

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 31 August 2014

Mateo Escalante likes this. Hasmukh Mehta welcome Just now · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 30 August 2014

Nice platform It is Sunday Bright and sunny day

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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