Next Time I Kiss A Woman Poem by Uriah Hamilton

Next Time I Kiss A Woman

Rating: 5.0


In this barroom,
They serve shots of despair
For alienated patrons to drink
And add further misery
To their laundry list of cares.

In August,
A man can be a hero
To his wife and child.
In September,
Sweeping their footsteps
From off the verandah.

In this life,
Tenderness is rare
Like an exotic African bird
Preserved in photography
In a coffee table book.

Next time I kiss a woman,
I’ll taste her breath
Slowly and sweetly,
Linger in her eyes
For eternity
Before I make my exit
And retreat into the shadows
Of another prolonged exile.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Fowler 19 April 2007

One could not read this poem and remain unmoved. Compelling imagery, immeasurable sadness, and beauty that is truth indeed. World class, Uriah. Sandra

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Goldy Locks 14 April 2007

spending a little time between kisses, Uriah? I know the feeling. At the risk of saying too much, i was spoiled at college. Touching write (enthralling opening) ! Sus.

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Sadly beautiful....Vivid images...sobering tone(no pun intended) ...like the taste of metaphor employed..Quality stuff, Uriah... Still a Supporter, ......F.j.R.

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