Next Time Poem by ethan humphrys

Next Time



NEXT TIME
All alone in a crowded world
Invisible until that time of need
A brother, a friend, a son, a lover
Next time i will say, 'No, '
Next time, 'Sorry, i'm busy, '
Next time, 'Do it yourself, '
The next time comes
........ I'm happy to help
At least they know me then

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Good. Short and sweet.

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Danielle Guscott 04 December 2009

Painfully honest - simply written and all the more powerful for that. Very well done. Expressing a sense of vulnerability that we all have and don't show. I can really relate to this poem.

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 03 December 2009

very short but very good.

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Joseph Poewhit 03 December 2009

A friend in time, is a friend indeed

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