ijlal haider


Newton...... Told Me - Poem by ijlal haider

hey newton....

tell me..tell me.. wat u did wid the apple

that hit you hard, hard enough,

get u gravity in simple...

you ate it or throw away,

cursed the mighty for natural drill,

filled joy running with shrill

tell me...tell me your way...

no.. no...books not..

though they give laws,

facts, equations...

but talk, talk about you a lot.

i wanna know the fate of apple

that hit u hard, hard enough,

get u gravity in simple...

only,

3 idiot, confused apple

made into history of people..

first... our fella adam's apple,

old, religious and stupid apple

with little dizzy dazed origin

present in old, young and virgin..

next one is yours

neglected, silent but bold

whose fate is untold...

tell me.... newton tell me...

what did you do wid the apple? ? ?

last but not least.....

job's apple (steve job's apple products)

modern rich technical apple

photosynthesis gone..yes....photosynthesis gone

for energy power is on...



ohh..holy.. got the answer..

over the year...

your natural apple, gave the lesson of science,

turned into technical apple....rather robotic apple...

same

as fate of human......

ROBOT..

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Comments about Newton...... Told Me by ijlal haider

  • Rookie Salema Khatun (12/17/2011 9:44:00 AM)

    nice and deff. poem. keep it up (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 13,405 Points Ramesh Rai (11/15/2011 9:35:00 PM)

    My dear frnd,

    A nice poem on Newton, you can see my face book he is my ideal person. he was too kind, gentle and nice. but your poem is too nice. keep it up (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sonali Sings (11/14/2011 8:25:00 AM)

    Amazingly excellent write. Should be recommended in physics book at the end of the related chapter, to make it all the more interesting rather than the usual boring one...Create more of such poems! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sahara Adhikari (11/14/2011 8:19:00 AM)

    quite different view...n impressive creativeness :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 19 Points Abhishek Tiwari (11/13/2011 1:36:00 PM)

    Wow! Quite a different point of view!
    Thats a poetic point of view that has overplayed the physical fundas!
    And then the journey to the Steve Jobs!
    Lovely (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 136 Points Romeo Della Valle (11/13/2011 2:17:00 AM)

    Excellent! A beautiful and well crafted write that has become your stepping stone toward the top of the Poetry World! Thank you for sharing this amazing poem with all of us and the World! I expect to read more from you! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie ijlal Haider (11/13/2011 1:47:00 AM)

    i have started a poetry blog named.... RANDOM RIGHTING...
    for more poem visit pibi2.blogspot.com
    your comments means a lot...... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, November 13, 2011

Poem Edited: Sunday, November 13, 2011


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