New Start Poem by stephanie buchanan

New Start



things have always had it ups and downs
now i see i am the one to change them

so now i am beginning to try and make changes
get rid of all the bad in my life and be thankful for the good i have

finally realized i cannot help everything
i am no where to help others i need help myself

it time for me to make myself happy
i am excited about the new changes that will come

so too all the people who know me i hope you ready
cause i am about to become someone that u never expected

as they say out with the old and in with the new
cause i see who my real friends are

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susanna Morris 06 April 2009

=) it's good...but just a recomendation...I think you should add more desriptive words. good though =)

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