New Life Poem by sekharan pookkat

New Life

Rating: 4.8


A body covered in white
Was laid on the floor
Lamps were shining bright
And the flames were waving in the wind

Her breathes motion and voice
Ended slowly at night
Barking of the dogs echoed in the dark
Seeing the enemy parked in outside

Fought against the enemies inside
Entered into another world outside
Leaving debts to redeem once more
Of an eternal life different from all

She sees again and lives again
Through her eyes in an another body
Transplanted to redeem once more
To clear out debts in the real world

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Donate your eyes after death- Promote eye donation campaign in your area
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Poetheart Morgan 19 September 2013

Did you believe in reincarnation? ? ? I believe in that. One life to me is too short to experiment, to learn and to apply. I have and want to live all emotions at once Sekharan. i do not want to regret for not having done and die dry. That is a poem to think.

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Neela Nath Das 06 October 2013

It is a nice poem both emotionally and realistically.Fab.

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Pankajam K 23 September 2013

The message of organ donation is catching up now-a-days. A relevant one anytime, .

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Lasoaphia Quxazs 22 September 2013

That is right to live in another body. I believe in that. As we are here to learn our lessons, those people die who cannot learn anymore, later they born again to continue and getting a new chance.

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David Wood 21 September 2013

In the UK we all have to opt in for donating our body parts after death unless people decide to opt out.

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Heather Wilkins 19 September 2013

I have a feeling poet heart might be on to something. It could so easily be so. nice

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