New Alternative Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

New Alternative

Rating: 4.8


Sound sleep without any noise
Day starts with bird’s sweet voice
Rest so essential without any choice
All ideas stored in mind with next day’s poise

Complete body relaxes but not mind
Getting new ideas and alternates find
May be they are active cells come to action
Fight with solution and offer novel reaction

Mild sun rays get end dreams to abrupt end
Sudden hurry to get up and ways to mend
Whole body gears up for the new race
Ready to go into action challenges face

It is not day to day routine but hard struggle
So much pressure and some times to buckle
Failure, humiliation but efforts to survive
Learning new things with resolve and strive

Dead are buried and may not speak
Living beings may feel frustrated and weak
Sometimes forcing to end the entire efforts
Losing confidence and maintain the rapports

It is endless struggle to be pressed and kept
No wise man have ever lamented and wept
It may be fall on ground but resolve to rise again
Not to loose hope but try and have solid gain

People may laugh and cut a joke
Unnecessary meddle and try to poke
Sometimes irritations and response evoke
May be unexpected result with masterly stroke

Steering the course in difficult situation
Gaining the ground wit exact and correct evaluation
Not missing the opportunity when knocks door
Show of satisfaction only after reaching the shore

Nothing may come on the way and deny
Success may come and opportunities many
No looking back with riding on the wings
Who knows when poor will be crowned as king?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Radha Seth 11 September 2009

Sound sleep without any noise Day starts with bird’s sweet voice

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Saroj Davde 11 September 2009

Mild sun rays get end dreams to abrupt end Sudden hurry to get up and ways to mend

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Reshma Punjabi 11 September 2009

Complete body relaxes but not mind Getting new ideas and alternates find May be they are active cells come to

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Poonam Suthar 11 September 2009

Complete body relaxes but not mind Getting new ideas and alternates find May be they are active cells come to action..10

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Kashi Paul 11 September 2009

It is endless struggle to be pressed and kept No wise man have ever lamented and wept

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Ashley Paul 17 October 2009

Sound sleep without any noise Day starts with bird’s sweet voice Rest so essential without any choice

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Severina Dsouza 16 October 2009

Complete body relaxes but not mind Getting new ideas and alternates find

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Sahar Sahar 04 October 2009

Poem points incentives to proceed farward, with out any delay., ............to achieve our prospectives in life

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Ahmad Shiddiqi 16 September 2009

Sensitive and full of surprises. Keep writing!

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G Kandoi 15 September 2009

Complete body relaxes but not mind Getting new ideas and alternates find May be they are active cells come to action

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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