Never Let Go Poem by tanvi damle
Never Let Go
They tell me nothing can be done, it's too late,
God has already sealed her fate.
I scream and tell them to wait,
but you're already at Heaven's gate.
I hold your hand and wait at your bedside,
with tears in my eyes and my tongue tied.
Eventually they whisper, 'She's no more, she's gone',
I stare blankly and tell them they're wrong.
Some then offer condolence hugs and sympathetic stares,
others show their comfort, extend their care.
I fake a smile, go and wait in your room,
for I know that you'll come home soon.
They come back again and tell me that you're gone,
I shake my head and tell them they're wrong.
It can't be true, you can't be dead,
they are just messing with my head.
I call your name out loud,
and search for your comforting face in the crowd.
This time, they shake me up and tell me you're gone,
I scream at them and tell them they're wrong.
I think of you, it making me smile,
for you've just gone for a walk, you'll be back in a while.
But it's getting late and I'm starting to worry,
Come home soon, please do hurry.
It's been two years and I know now you're never coming home,
how could you leave me in this world on my own?
Now they no longer tell me that you're gone,
for I finally accept that I was wrong.
Some try to help me through the pain,
But all their efforts go in vain.
For without you, I just feel out of place,
There's a void in my heart no one can replace.
I miss you more than words can say,
How am I supposed to make it even through a single day?
But in spite of everything, you're still here, I will not cry,
For I'll see you soon, it's never goodbye…
Lovely flow, great poem. The word choice used caused me to feel what you felt. Keep it up. Please read some of my poems and let me know what you think.
Amazing poem that not only holds emotions in the words, but can pull at the heartstrings inside me.
This poem serves as a vent for the pent up emotions. Touching. Loved the rhyme scheme, the rhythm. Lovely poem.
Dear Tanvi Damle, your poem is really very heart touching..The pain and sorrow of your heart at the loss of a dear one has been expressed so movingly in this poem. You still feel the presence of the dear one- - - -because soul never dies- - Death is the reality of life cycle.We have to accept it.Thank you for sharing your beautiful poem.Keep writing.Wish you a bright future.
love laments in room of darkness to ruffle as pangs of pain gripes of being seized, quite emotive and surcharged with heart felt sorrow yet narrative story of love as when departed, thanks for inviting me to share,
WOW its beautifully written and emotional its moving Simetime its too hard to accept that something is gone someone so special yet they always leave at anycase its supposed to make us strong yet even after years it hurts but be of good chear God knows what is happening and is always comforting us through it all. When it goes away Look for God, theres no space he can never fill in your life. Keep writing
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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This is a really heart-touching poem. The depth of your sadness, echoes throughout each line; the emotional intensity of loss, gives poetic power to this poem.