Never Giving Up Poem by Romeo Della Valle

Never Giving Up



Barely conscious
Or hardly caring which way
I face the World,
I take a bolder step,
Traveling steadily
Against the wind
That is sometimes too strong,
An air so cold
That it numbs my senses
Until I feel myself
Turned inside out…

II try to keep the direction
I have set for
So that somehow,
I will arrive somewhere
As I know the path
I have followed
Has brought me
To a better place,
A freer state of mind
Where I will truly
Become myself!


©All Rights Reserved-2012

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Guy Lip-more 26 August 2012

Very good poem sir, I sense almost what you were feeling, very inspiring poem.

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Ekaterina M. Polischuk 26 August 2012

a very good idea of the poem)))) Never give up! ! ! and take care, you are a very good poet

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Poetheart Morgan 24 August 2012

I love changes.! It requires courage, audacity.And you have. Beautiful heart. Superbe! ! !

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Linda Moore 23 August 2012

The path is always forward. And we must never give up. I like your thought so much. Positive thinking is going forward, Always forward ther is no other way: -) Wonderful

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