Never Forgotten Poem by Connor Whyte

Never Forgotten

Rating: 5.0


I look to the sky and angels swarm and circle with wings so bright holding weapons as gold as the sun, I look below and I see demons crawling with claws as sharp as stone, With weapons as dark as the night, They are feeding on the weak and turning those that don't believe to dust, The smell is unbearable the smell lingers and smells of must.

So much evil and so much good, The battle is a bloodbath and the lands are being turned to ash and brimstone, I stand on the edge of the world looking down on the war, No where to run no where to hide, No fear no pain only survival, The weak are falling and the strong are flourishing.

I stand on the the edge and see what our world has come to, The darkness is being pierced by light, And the light is being surrounded in darkness, No death only eternity standing between heaven and hell, This is the world that we lived on the world we loved being torn to pieces, What we do is make it worse and some make it better everyday is a fight between demons and angels.

Evil bleeds and the good cry, Love is being stripped making our lives different, Some are loved and some are forgotten the ones that are forgotten turn to dark, The ones that are loved turn to light, Its time to grab hold of the forgotten and give them love they have needed, Baby's are born and some are kept and some are left abandon, What happens to the ones that are abandon, Nothing happens they are left and forgotten.

I will never forget the ones that were forgotten as I stand on the edge of the world looking down on you, And sharing your pain and turn it to comfort, This war is just another day that goes by, Fighting everyday to make it through keeping my will to keep going on, Nothing will stand in my way as I can face the world and not feel ashamed of the steps some of us try to overcome, We can over come anything with the will to keep going on.

I look to the sky and angels swarm and circle with wings so bright, I look below and I see demons crawling with claws as sharp as stone.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alicia Phillips 11 March 2016

This is like a a page from a book that you don't want to put down its very captivating and a attention grabber to where you don't want to stop reading but yet still very deep its an amazing poem and I would rate it over a ten plus its something I could l read over and over again and still not get tired of it great job 😁

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Carolina Soto 01 May 2012

This poem is true and I agree with you that everyday there is a struggle to face.

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Carolina Soto 01 May 2012

Wow, i really liked this poem and I agree with Samantha never stop writing you hve a talent

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Samantha Rak 28 April 2012

WOW! ! ! You are AMAZING! ! You should NEVER stop writing! Where guns are some people's weapons you can use your pen/pencil/computer as yours. Keep writing! ! ! [3

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Romeo Della Valle 28 April 2012

Wow! Connor, this is a reservoir filled with powerful words and rich imagery that clearly shows your great potential in the Poetry World! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it up! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City!

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