Never Changing My Opinion! ! ! Poem by tanvi damle

Never Changing My Opinion! ! !

Rating: 3.3


Even if the earth would shrink,
and there would be no water to drink.
Even if the sun wouldn't give out light,
and everything would no longer be bright.
Even if the river would turn into a waterfall,
and the mountains started growing tall.
Even if the world would turn it's back on me,
and in the darkness, rays of light i could no longer see.
Even if anyone at me wouldn't smile,
and things would be bad for awhile.
Even if the Statue Of Liberty would sit down,
and start to frown.
Even if the devil's to the earth came,
My opinion bout you would still remain the same!
Among all the rest,
You would still remain the VERY BEST!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kassem Oude 23 November 2008

How lucky is your best one. He/she would above human. Beautiful poem woven by nice words and rhyme.

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Indira Babbellapati 28 December 2008

even if all these were to happen vow, you'll remain chin up, lady!

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Dee Daffodil 03 December 2008

Wow! ! This is a lovely tribute to someone who obviously means a lot to you. You express yourself so eloquently! ! Nice writing...keep it up! Hugs, Dee

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Kesav Easwaran 30 November 2008

A moving write on immovable commitment on love and passion...well framed lines, Tanvi...10

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 24 November 2008

And thats the purest love of all.What a love you have got there Damle.

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Indira Babbellapati 24 November 2008

good stuff for slam-books!

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