Negative And Positive. Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul
Negative And Positive.
Don't think negative sign as a zero,
If positive sign is heroine negative is hero.
Though positive is day, negative is night,
Later is dark and former is bright.
Without darkness there is no meaning of bright,
Day has no meaning without night.
Where there is sorrow there is joy,
Where there is child there is toy.
Magnet has a South Pole and a North Pole,
North Pole attracts South Pole as a whole.
In electricity there is positive and negative charge,
When they merge, they can supply light large.
Both have power but don't have negative attitude,
Always think positive that will give you certitude.
Virtuous qualities have brightness like a day,
Anger, greed and lust are on the night-bay.
Truth, Nonviolence and charity have positive qualities,
We should always follow these as they have moralities.
Of course these have brightness due to the negative,
God is in favour of moral qualities, be always positive.
Here poem thinks about positive and negative sign. According him both has importance, but he likes positive one. He always likes to be positive which may be compared with the day light. Though night has importance marked as negative, he wishes all people to be positive.Truthfulness, nonviolence and charity are divine qualities; these can be compared with the day. On the other hand anger, lust, greed etc. are bad qualities which may be compared with night marked as negative sign. Poet requests all to be positive always as God likes them. This is the theme of the poem in nutshell. It is written in Deogarh, Odisha, India and is dedicated to the people of the world.
I enjoy your use of metaphor to drive your points of philosophy. Excellent poem
picture of Kesav Easwaran xNice allegories you bring into to end with a nicer message Kumarmani 3 Aug 2015 by Kesav Easwaran | Reply picture of Chris G. Vaillancourt xLoved this very original write 3 Aug 2015 by Chris G. Vaillancourt | Reply picture of sunprincess ♡ ♡ ♡ x.......being happy and positive is most attractive...very nice message and great write ★ 3 Aug 2015 by sunprincess ♡ ♡ ♡ | Reply picture of Ramin Ara xWell done, , , Sir, , , 4 Aug 2015 by Ramin Ara | Reply picture of Jane Taylor Hardy xBeautifully allegorical.....without darkness there is no meaning of bright'' my favorite line. Written by a wise and intelligent author. Very nicely penned. 4 Aug 2015 by Jane Taylor Hardy | Reply picture of Nishu Mathur xNoble sentiments, noble thoughts, noble poetry. 4 Aug 2015 by Nishu Mathur | Reply picture of Elena S(*_*) xExcellent poem! Beautiful and true! Thank you for sharing. 5 Aug 2015 by Elena S(*_*) | Reply picture of Thomas A Robinson xYou can hide darkness in light but the darkness cannot hide the light. 5 Aug 2015 by Thomas A Robinson | Reply picture of Sylvia Frances Chan xExcellent poetry, allegorical, wonderful end rhymes and I admire the theme, Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem. 6 Aug 2015 by Sylvia Frances Chan | Reply picture of Sneha SK xThis is beautiful and I quite adore the intricate metaphors you indoctrinate. Thank you for sharing. 6 Aug 2015 by Sneha SK | Reply
Without darkness there is no meaning of bright! Nice piece of work.
lovely poem. Do agree that being positive is good. but if a person sees something positive in every negative charge, then for sure the end will be positive.
Liked this thoughtful poem....................................10
A lot of thought went into writing this poem. There are two sides to every coin. If one doesn't understand what is right then one doesn't understand wrong either. Discipline begins at home, pre school. We should all be taught the difference between good and bad, right and wrong, from the very beginning. If we instil a positive attitude in our children then they will become positive adults. An admirable write Kumar.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Opposites when merged release immense energy and create positive results! But negative thoughts are not going to help us. At the same time, positive thoughts can work miracles! A thought provoking poem! Enjoyed!