Need Some Sleep Poem by Evan Wilson

Need Some Sleep

Rating: 5.0


Today is here again
Up all night
#*%k me
Why do this to myself
Why do I care
See the light
See the time
Up all night
Why why why
Three nights up
Three nights strong
Three nights gone
Three nights long
Maybe tonight the world will be gone
One more night I'll be all alone
Body tired body hurts
One more night gone for sure
Eyes are heavy
Eyes are week
Maybe tonight I'll get some sleep
Maybe tonight I won't wipe

(8/16/11)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Romeo Della Valle 16 August 2011

Impressive! A well penned and poignant write that clearly shows that poetry runs in your blood! 10+++ Keep inspiring the World with your talented poetic writes! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! ... Have a nice sleep my friend!

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Unwritten Soul 16 August 2011

HMmmm guess you really need sleep then you will change some lines Why why why Three nights up Three nights strong Three nights gone Three nights long but forth night different zone rest free and strong back to bone I need some sleep, i want back home Now Now Now...Hahaha joking! Unwritten Soul

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