Natures’ Forces Poem by Sulaiman Mohd Yusof

Natures’ Forces

Rating: 5.0


The landscapes
the oceans
the skies
the winds
would come
with hidden messages
to change
the contour
of life
are we human
can save
our lives?
To some extent
there's no place
to run
when your time
comes
waving
at you

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sadiqullah Khan 27 May 2008

a collective thinking, , 'can we human, can save our lives'...nice write starting from nature, ,

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~ Jon London ~ 28 May 2008

Very true, For anything to change..it's us who must change first....the answers to our worries surround us all.... best wishes bro jon

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Jacob Gifford 11 March 2009

I really like these poem I have a poem sort of like these it is called Natural disasters you should read it some time

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Rema Prasanna 08 June 2008

philosophical yet true, is there a place one can run and hide, universe teaches lessons humans forgetful, a good write on theme universal

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Sanjay Pandian 01 June 2008

Poet of patho, that's what Mr. Sulaiman is. With death put in such a way now I am not afraid to die. Nice to have met you. But I am not in a hurry to leave this place not with Mr. Sulaiman and Jon London and the other poets and their lovely, profound and amazing styles of poetry. Bring ém on Sulaiman. Keep smiling and keep on amazing us. As Keats wrote, 'A thing of beauty is a joy for ever'so keep us giving joy with your poems. Take care.

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Anjana Asok 31 May 2008

wow nice one.keep writing

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Catherine Rica Cosico 31 May 2008

there's no place to run when your time comes waving at you True! ! ! though we are the architect of our own craft...our future lies in our very own hands there's nothing we do when our time comes waving at us...Sad! ! ! Like a friend who just died yesterday at an early age...His time came with a big surprise... Cate

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