Natures And Love Poem by Binod Bastola

Natures And Love

Rating: 3.5


I free in this fly;
I feel in this love and lover's joy.
Scent of flower
i feel in me;
Horizon of endless love of free i feel in me- -
i see in this fly, a lover's try.
A bond of beauty: Natures and love,
Lovers and natures amalgamation.

Natures And Love
Sunday, July 5, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Commendable work...Just t of constructive criticism ifbold....Always upper-case/capitalize the letter (I) when it is by itself, even if it's in the middle of a line...Otherwise...Nicely Done, O....~ FjR~

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