Nature Of Life Journey Poem by Unwritten Soul

Nature Of Life Journey

Rating: 4.4


Walking in the air, stepping in the wind
should we believe we are flying?
Shattered glass or it will be broken
Do we feel the same thing inside?
If we draw a pictures with different color hues
Will we understand the abstract we have done?
Sometimes we flying not with wings but dreams
Sometimes we broken, always come with a lot of reasons
Also always a lot of reasons to make us to stay calm
It's all just in life abstract drawing we need to see clear thing
Like when anger in soul keep burning all the trust of anything
Fueling by the pain and consuming all innocent dreams
Will be someday we regret as nothing left, but just the ashes
Ashes of something from something beautiful we dream
Could be the ashes just a special life made for one day
For fertilizing soil of hope and grow the remaining new life
Like a tree to find source of sunlight to green all my days
Lot of reasons to fall but i must grow toward light
And my root deeper to earth gravity of life reality
One day i will be stronger to face harsh wind
Walking in the air, stepping in the wind
Flying? yes we can, I believe we can
we can flying when spirit is our wings

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jinal Oswal 24 January 2012

A beautiful piece of light, life, a fresh breeze, a sweet scent... Yes we can... I loved the spirit.. the beautiful cycle of life, of nature.. again Soul, you shine... and we shine because you share your light with us... I loved this poem :) Thanks for being the beautiful Soul...

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Hans Vr 26 January 2012

Fully agree. What a wonderful closing line, we can fly when spirit is our wings. Very meaningful poem

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Odejayi Sodiq Adewale 19 January 2012

all about life....great poem

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Wahab Abdul 24 January 2012

this is a very nice poem..i like the poem because of its quality of flow of thought and flow of content...good play of logic too...it is a celebral poem...keep writing like this poem..top marks 10++++and please read my new poems

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Dave Walker 13 January 2012

Like this my lil soul. To fly in dreams means We can go any where we want, we can go High into the sky feel the freedom and clear our minds. A fantastic poem my lil soul.

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Mj Lemon 27 February 2019

The experience of nature in our dreams...a magnificent observation. If we feel rage inside, do we experience the fire? If we deride an old friend, do we feel the chill, the ice? You remind that nature exists inside as well as outside. A great poem, Soul.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 February 2018

Life has been nicely and touchingly compared with the elements of nature. Marvelous poem shared, thanks.

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Rebecca Navarre 05 December 2017

Thank You Ever So Much For Sharing This! ! ! ! ! Endless Endless! ! ! ! ! 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++

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Rebecca Navarre 05 December 2017

Oh Soul! ! ! ! ! This Is Ever Ever So Beautiful! ! ! ! ! Such Spirit Within! ! ! ! ! That So Strong And Beautifully Sings! ! ! ! ! Ever So Heart Up Lifting! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++ Like A Light You Glow! ! ! ! !

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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 October 2017

It is a marvellous poem on life journey having fantastic depiction and stunning expression. The beginning lines are more attractive. Let me quite.. .. Walking in the air, stepping in the wind should we believe we are flying? Shattered glass or it will be broken Do we feel the same thing inside? If we draw a pictures with different color hues Will we understand the abstract we have done? I feel it is a high philosophical poem shared nicely. Thanks.

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