Jahan zaib

Rookie - 55 Points (February 05,1981 / Malakand Pakistan)

Nature and You


In sound of stream, in whistle of breeze,
In flight of birds, in buzzing of bees,
In clouds and rain, in rays of sun,
In light of moon, in joy and fun,
On heights of mount, in depth of seas,
In rainbow’s colors, in green of trees,
In sparkling stars, in waves of shore,
In every Scene of nature free,
I see none but a shade of thee.

Submitted: Wednesday, May 15, 2013
Edited: Thursday, September 12, 2013

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  • Veteran Poet - 2,649 Points Wahab Abdul (5/20/2013 8:33:00 PM)

    very nice and sweet poem indeed.. like it.. and enjoyed it, too (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 4,035 Points Hazel Durham (5/17/2013 5:31:00 AM)

    Beautiful, so serene with all the wonders of nature, your true love is smiling from every scene! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 4 Points Nader Baheri (5/16/2013 11:49:00 AM)

    wonderful.for me THEE is a strong shade of God.10+++++
    ~nb (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 602 Points Shahzia Batool (5/15/2013 3:10:00 PM)

    Duality of meaning is obvious...i feel the urge of interpreting it more on the spiritual grounds rather than the mundane one...To me here this YOU is God...let me call this balanced and beautiful poem as the Best of Jahan zaib (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 12 Points Farah Ilyas (5/15/2013 11:52:00 AM)

    To see your beloved 's image in everything is experienced when you fall in love with true enthusiasm, sound enchanting, lovely poem (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 182 Points Karen Sinclair (5/15/2013 11:25:00 AM)

    beautifully written....maybe one more word required in last line ie but (a) shade of thee....or (the) i hope you dont mind my suggestion...tyvm karen (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 987 Points Unwritten Soul (5/15/2013 11:23:00 AM)

    Definitely organic feeling grows in me and watered by your words here_Soul (Report) Reply

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