Natural Instincts.. Poem by Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi

Naturally come in mind and organic write! it simply good and happy words..i like this very much! But dont pity the rainbow as it only color what it can share Dont blame grass as it is not just soft but provide us the good air too Dont curse clouds because it generosity proven when it bless us with the rain You can shoot the sun but soon your arrow will melt, mean it really warm You pinch the Moon but for the night it still heal the dark with shines Running of water will still flow together no matter we twist it you warn the water falls not to jump on us but how? gravity is pulling it Oh natural instincts, it so beautiful nature but we cant twist what come in natural Come as they were created we cant never changed the beauty of they posses because the sun, cloud, moon, water, grass has more value than what we see and we only follow what we see and think as them also follow the law of nature when they were created and after all what was happen just a natural instinct but different instinct because we naturally different and it makes life beautiful the roles and the life we roll_Unwritten Soul

Thank you for the message, unwritten soul,

cleverly ties nature to your love..very nice.

Great use of similes.

love pouring from the heart of the ecstatic! good job!

a very poetic stream of thoughts all centered on praise on adoration of the One or one that is hinted at in the last line...This poem is very skilfully written, VS, with all the imagery and lines working towards the naturally concluding line...

I pity the rainbow as it is not as colorful as you, mother nature I scold the grass as it is not as soft as you, mother nature I curse the clouds that is not as generous as you, mother nature I shoot the sun as it is not as warm as you, mother nature, I pinch the moon as it plays hide and seek, not stationary as you mother nature, I twist the ears of running water, For it hides the curves of you, mother nature I warn the water falls not to jump on you, mother nature, I collect all those drops of water, To tie together to garland you, mother nature,