wabi sabi

Rookie - 145 Points (1973/07/13 / tokyo)

Natural - Poem by wabi sabi

Nature and you

don't control yourself
let nature control you

your climax isn't defined by yourself
your climax will be recognized after death


Comments about Natural by wabi sabi

  • Rookie - 72 Points Jayachandran Chakrapany (4/19/2012 10:53:00 PM)

    what a wonderful philosophy.i like it. (Report) Reply

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  • Veteran Poet - 1,194 Points Unwritten Soul (4/12/2012 12:25:00 AM)

    Nature and you move in destiny lines
    it can go lower as a deep valley or high as mountain
    go natural it's nature of up and down
    but with your life you can choose
    to go lower or climb higher
    so natural effect is within your choice
    take a choice and it will flow naturally
    but it started with you
    It's in your hand
    except fate_Unwritten Soul (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,391 Points Hans Vr (4/9/2012 7:15:00 AM)

    Condensed wisdom in well written verses (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, April 9, 2012



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