Nano Poetry-11 Poem by Tribhawan Kaul

Nano Poetry-11

Rating: 5.0


Craters decorating moon
Taunting, laughing at the
Indiscretion of a lover
Calling his beloved, MOON!

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shahzia Batool 19 August 2013

Kamaal poem! ! ! how differently you presented this age-old phenomenon with age-old, timeless beloved addressed commonly as Moon! ! !

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 19 August 2013

This witty write deserves a 10.

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Dave Walker 20 August 2013

A great little poem, Like it.

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Ramesh Rai 15 September 2013

amazing write and can see the beauty of a nano poetry

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Geetha Jayakumar 08 September 2013

Wow. Wonderful poem...Quiet Interesting to read.

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Adheez Van Der Beanthz 26 August 2013

interesting poem well done

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Valsa George 25 August 2013

A woman, if she sees the craters of the moon will be upset on being addressed as Moon! All that glitters is not gold...

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Heather Wilkins 24 August 2013

a good nano write. the moon is well known to lovers.

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Tribhawan Kaul

Tribhawan Kaul

Srinagar (J & K) India
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