Name Him Poem by Susan Lacovara

Name Him



Might it all be true, this man, this you
Arranging what could right the wrong
Rescued from a sea of strangers
Captive to her siren's song

Friday, August 22, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
(08/22/14) simply stated...she wonders, as he wanders
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Daniel Brick 30 August 2014

I like the last line - both the words and their placement at the very end. But when I read your POET'S NOTES I wondered if I was interpreting this situation correctly. It seemed to me this was a very compressed expression that this rapport is genuine, we could have an on-going relationship which will make up for past disappointments, and I am confident of my situation because he's attracted to me, my siren's song. I hope the poem is positive like that. Do you remember Joan Rivers' comedy routine - Oh, you think so. GROW UP!

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Anthony Burkett 29 August 2014

delightful! and intriguing... but mostly delightful! ... and intriguing! :)

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Sekharan Pookkat 25 August 2014

A song may be low tuned An answer may be true or false Thy name may be strange or familiar intriguing the soul in nightmare

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