Naked Love Poem by Lucifera Santez

Naked Love

Rating: 4.3


For you I am just a ghost,
Washed ashore the banks of shadow,
And you never look at me,
In the same way you ignored me before.
Without you my world’s grey,
Without colors, without solace,
In your vivid world,
You don’t have a place for black……
I guess that’s what I am to you,
A shade, a forgettable past.
Sometimes I try to defy my destiny,
Sometimes try to prove, you mean nothing,
But if you aren’t anyone,
Then why does it hurt,
Your disregard, your indifference.
It ices my heart,
Burns my soul,
Even for a moment with you,
I would abandon everything,
I would give up all.
You never want that moment with me,
It hurts me, can’t you see?
You try to kill my love,
Somehow I always save it…………
I would even give up all my smiles,
And take all your tears,
I just need a chance,
Would it be too much?
For you to spare me a glance.
I am a sailor,
Lost in love’s vast sea,
Oh my love, my darling,
You are my beacon,
A lighthouse for me,
I know you would protest when you hear it,
You won’t ever agree.
I guess your memories,
Your smiles, your words
Will always be mine,
And mine alone,
When I can’t have you,
They seem like best substitute………….

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hazel Durham 23 August 2013

You write with such deep emotions diving in to raw passion that sinks with forsaken love that ignores and cruelly hurts so profoundly! Inspired and great write!

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Noreen Carden 23 September 2013

Hi Lucifera a beautiful poem rich in feeling and meaning

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Khairul Ahsan 04 September 2013

When I can’t have you, They seem like best substitute…………. Very touchy!

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isaac Anneleng 26 August 2013

wow thats great and some taste of word i there

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Sally Plumb Plumb 24 August 2013

I understand your frustration. Try Curse.

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Chandini Jaswal 24 August 2013

An emotional and a lovely poem; I also wrote a similar poem titled, 'I remember the Day' Do read it and let me know about it

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