My Worst Enemy Poem by louis rams

My Worst Enemy

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my worst enemy is within me
an anger trying to be set free
i have hidden it for many a year
because it is full of fear.
the fear of telling what i see and feel
emotions that are very real.
real to the point of no return.
but! screaming for this voice to be heard.
this anger that's inside of me is when i see children
going through their aches and pains.
in a world that they did not create
let's help them before it's too late
there are children starving all around the earth
if this is what we have to offer
why did we allow the birth?
as adults we should see-that all we're offering is poverty.
i don't believe in abortion-i believe in life.
so let us think about it'twice'.
think of it all you can-and let's start giving a helping hand.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 30 August 2009

my worst enemy is within me an anger trying to be set free i have hidden it for many a year because it is full of fear..they are inside us very well dug in and surface when not required also.... lovley presentation of ills... i lliked it....10 read mine..... you all go back

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Mary Murphy 07 November 2008

This is great! Thanks for telling me about this poem it's great! good work, and I completly agree!

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angel unknown 07 November 2008

that is the truth. lets give a helping hand. good job keep writtin

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