My Wish Poem by Brittany Hafer

i love them all and i love you

what there is of ths works really well, Brittany! but there's not yet ough to sustain the poem - aim to develop with 2 more stanzas using the same rhythm - or variations from it. I think y've got an excellent ear for syllabic poetry - and i also like the way y're able to combine a concern with crafting with powerful emotions. DIM

very cute

Ah, not to be apart is a very deep wish alot want.: (Unfortuantly it doesn't always come true.

Very nice poem. Keep writing for I can see you got the heart and mind to write beautiful poetry. thanks and best wishes, melvin

nice and lovely! nicely penned.....

very sweet well done

cute simple..........

Sweet and cute verse. Love it.

this is so sweet, cute and funny all at once i love it