shivayadav yadav

Rookie - 28 Points (Aug 24 1956 / Karur / Tamilnadu / India.)

My Wine Cup - Poem by shivayadav yadav

We dance like the boat
With the passions as waves
I saw the wonders of the world
With the glimpse of her corner
Her sarree furl while she is walking
My wine cups are rolling in my hands
Like the boats wavering on the sea
Just like the waves on
The banks
Thoughts of my love
Rises in my beating heart
My wine cups are rolling in
The grounds

Comments about My Wine Cup by shivayadav yadav

  • Rookie - 173 Points Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK (4/3/2010 11:41:00 AM)

    ‘…Her sarree furl while she is walking/My wine cups are rolling in my hands…’

    Imagery with tall High…wine cup…symbolizes sarree…intelligently used as metaphor
    Ms. Nivedita
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  • Rookie - 42 Points Obinna Eruchie (11/16/2009 11:03:00 AM)

    What comparison you have penned to make up a good description. Nice! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 42 Points Obinna Eruchie (11/16/2009 10:49:00 AM)

    What a comparison to bring out imagery. Nice! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Shalini Sundararamalingam (11/16/2009 9:03:00 AM)

    nice comparison, , , good poem (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Catrina Heart (11/16/2009 5:49:00 AM)

    great imagery...........well done! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, November 16, 2009

Poem Edited: Monday, November 16, 2009

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