My Valentine Moon Poem by Ankit Verma
My Valentine Moon
Moon hide in eclipse,
but you always in light.
Moon changes every day,
but you always same for me.
Moon brighten by other's light,
but you having your own beauty.
Moon is beyond my reach,
but you always with me.
nicely comapring your love with the beautifull moon............good job. come and read my poems and give me your reveiws. regards, tanya gupta.
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A compelling and creative contrast that is refreshing.
The moon is rich with symbolism especially in my culture. Here i believe it’s meant to symbolize inner strength (?) nice poem could use a little editing.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Nice idea. I think an extra is, the, or stylistic comma here and there would help with reading it.