My Valentine Poem by Kranthi Pothineni

My Valentine



On this rosy day of Valentine
My lonely heart started to shine
With the inside beauty of mine
To have a romantic wine and dine

My heart sang its love is divine
Said, to me it can even combine
Both the earth and sky on one line
For a sign of smile in eyes of mine

It sang, that it can even define
The lovely beauty of cloud nine
And hidden beauty in depth of pine
By looking deep into eyes of mine

It made my eyes to show a sign
That I will love to have a wine
And will forever love to assign
My lovely heart as my Valentine

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajaram Ramachandran 12 February 2010

You have set the poem to uniform rhyme, giving a place to your Valentine in your lovely heart at the end. Good.

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 12 February 2010

it's hard to write a poem with a single rhyme pattern.... proves only that you're a great poet..... well done!

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Louis Rams 12 February 2010

the last two lines said it all. gr8888t write before this valentines night.

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Antonio Liao 17 February 2010

what a memory of hope...a flying heart of solitude amongst the wilderness of surrender and passion....complicated yet! a things to accept what is love and fantasy....Great...God blesses...a 10 +++

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 15 February 2010

An introvert valentine, Kranthi, but nice one.

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Anju Addanki 15 February 2010

Its very soft and nice but yes it could be more romantic

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Eyan Desir 14 February 2010

I was hoping it would be more romantic good write

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Joseph Poewhit 13 February 2010

Comes across with a gentle feeling.

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