My Utopia ~*~ Pantoum ~*~ Poem by Kristin Nicole RothDavis

My Utopia ~*~ Pantoum ~*~

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A slumber did my spirit seal
In the dark recesses of my mind;
To a planet far more surreal
Where a Dali clock tells the time.

In the dark recesses of my mind
I’ve built an oasis within my isolation;
Where a Dali clock tells the time
Melting eagerly in each idyllic hallucination.

I’ve built an oasis within my isolation
My mind’s eye has limitless space;
Melting eagerly in each idyllic hallucination
Until I’ve forgotten my own face.

My mind’s eye has limitless space
Imagination will take me far from this cell;
Until I’ve forgotten my own face
I float far above my body’s shell.

Imagination will take me far from this cell
To a planet more surreal;
I float far above my body’s shell
A slumber did my spirit seal.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Geoff Warden 02 March 2007

nicly done, enjoyed this read very much

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Southern Oklahoma... <country gal here>
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