My Troubled Love Poem by Andrew Pelletier

My Troubled Love

Rating: 5.0


There's this girl, whose in need
We're good friends, yes indeed
I always wonder, whats the matter?
It seem like her world will shatter

She goes weeks, without a word
Her troubled ways, have me concerned
Where is she? I have no clue
I know not of what to do

Despite her beauty, she's a mess
Her pain inside, you couldn't guess
There's hidden sorrow, behind that smile
Next time we talk, will be a while

I miss her, without a doubt
She seems trapped, can she get out?
I want to help her find a way
To not be troubled everyday
No matter what, I'm here for her
She's my good friend, that's for sure

Friday, April 17, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: friendship,life,love,lust,pain
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
ANDREW 01 December 2017

YOU ARE DESCRIBING YOURSELF.YOU ARETHE SAME WAY. IT IS YOUR AUTO BIOGRAPHY

0 0 Reply
Roseann Shawiak 03 September 2015

Very heartfelt, touching and beautifully written poem. Patience, when she is ready she will decide to talk to you, it cannot be forced. She is very fortunate indeed to have a good friend like you. Very compassionate and caring rendition in this poem. Thank you for Sharing. RoseAnn

0 0 Reply
S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 18 April 2015

Only if she resorts to God it will help your friend and love if she is messed up with luv. I enjoyed the superb poetic rhyming here and its nice u sympathise with her in kind words here. Kudos. Do read my poems too but pls comment only on the latest.

0 1 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Andrew Pelletier

Andrew Pelletier

Providence, Rhode Island
Close
Error Success