My Treasure Poem by Kateryna Polishchuk

My Treasure

Rating: 5.0


I`m walking through my life alone
And sleep in time when people live,
My heart is jumping broken stone,
I see the way my dreams believe.
Yes, I am smiling on my way,
But go with tear on my cheek.
I see the world day after day,
I am not crazy, I am freak.
I see you`re staying in the hell,
A lot of people are inside,
Their souls like the roses smell,
They aren`t alive, by angels cried.
I see your eyes are full of pain,
You are afraid of my word,
Your heart is crystal, dropp of rain,
A little piece of our world.
I take your heart in one my hand,
It is my treasure, mystery.
You give me love, to people send,
When we`re together and are free.
Together in my dreams of course,
You give me chance to keep your love,
I always talk to you because
To think of you is not enough.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

great flow to catch the treasure... and lots of thanks for given your sweet comment

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Sagar Shelar 28 February 2012

NICE POEM. Your poems are beyond the world. You show your strange attitude in your poems.

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Wahab Abdul 28 February 2012

'' A little piece of our world. I take your heart in one my hand, '' Dear poetess, you have the very potential to be a great poetess, i like your style of writing, you r young but you write like a matured one, your writing is full of mysterious mystics. please keep writing.

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Harindhar Reddy 27 February 2012

Mysticism rained in your poem. You are something special. I can see mysterious things in your writing. You soul is echoing William Blake. I think soon fame with be your slave. Oh god Gracious! Oh girl your poem is outrageous! Excellent! **************

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