~ My Thee My Thou ~ Poem by MS. NIVEDITA BAGCHI SPC. UK.

~ My Thee My Thou ~

Rating: 4.8


Love Echoes Love Echoes
In Euphony In Symphony
In vast Universe
In Milky Way.

Unshackled tune swings
Buoyancy in me clings.

Quest the Echo
Fathom the Echo.

Cataclysm of immortality
In the abode of eternity.

Lo:
I find my fond
My Thee My Thou
In love soaked Euphony
In love soaked Symphony.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bachha Chakravorty 19 April 2010

‘Lo: I find my fond My Thee My Thou In love soaked Euphony In love soaked Symphony.’ Finest conclusive lines I’ve ever read This is great poem to levitate psyche into Love and Love and Lovefull Congrat 10++

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Pranab K Chakraborty 16 May 2010

It is really an irony. Poet also hears the love everywhere, and we the worthless creatures simply hankering love to get with the touch in lips, palms etc. So great is the poet. Her soul is so rectified to be united with the universe. Nothing is ugly on the earth except the readers who are not ready to tune with her same chord. Good writing as a surrendering song which could be sang in a temple. But our hearing is burdened with the cacophony of our low living surroundings where hunger is the first and foremost wanting. Yet the poet's thee and thou is no doubt very romantic and surrealistic in nature where at least the sinking glory we can imagine to reach. Poet please touch with your realised soul as we can sometimes feel that really love blows in the wind as the highest philosophical wisdom man have acquired on the Earth. 10+++ Apoet

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‘Cataclysm of immortality/In the abode of eternity.’ Wow! Immersed in ocean of eternity. Flood of delight ‘I find my fond My Thee My Thou In love soaked Euphony In love soaked Symphony.’ Euphony and Symphony soaked in Love indeed excellent.15 10++

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Afzal Shauq 29 May 2010

I find my fond My Thee My Thou In love soaked Euphony In love soaked Symphony. extreme and dapth of love is part of this poem.. awesome and quite interesting one.. liked it

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Lo: I find my fond My Thee My Thou In love soaked Euphony In love soaked Symphony..... where there is love there is God. you may find in every small particles and u need not bother about it.t is for asking and you may love to be loved if offered love.... vey nice wy of putting it.....10 read mine....minutes away.. thiught for self

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Chinedu Dike 19 April 2015

Powerful piece on love, well articulated and nicely penned in poetic diction. A lovely poem indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Ramesh Rai 15 December 2014

Short sweet and mesmerizing. Enjoyed the read.10

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Ken E Hall 10 January 2011

Like singing in the rain of the universe when thou hast thine thee with glee...luvli.. universal poetry 10/10...regards

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Arshad Khan 05 November 2010

Awesome! ! ! ! Awesome! ! ! ! Awesome! ! ! No words to express my feelings.You are God's gift. Happy Diwali to you and your family.

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Bert Bell 03 November 2010

This is a wonderful poem. I don't know why people are giving you slow votes. I give 10/10 and more if I could. This is real poetry and it's very good.

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