My Suicide Note Poem by Abdulhakim Haliru

My Suicide Note

Rating: 4.5


It is a world where;
I am the only one that cares for me
The only one that advises me
I cannot go through the thicks
The thorns are piercing and hurting

I went out to see my bride
She says no again.
My neighbor hates me.

I cannot make a living
I have not eaten.
The thirst is unbearable
The hunger unquenchable
My hands are yearning
My mind is a work shop
Lo, the devil is an owner

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Max Reif 24 June 2007

Though this piece is painful, yet it as writing I admire its bold and direct expression. Reading your bio, I see you have come far and are quite accomplished. I wish you the very best.

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