ramesh rai

Gold Star - 17,735 Points (13.12.1955 / howrah)

My Struggle - Poem by ramesh rai

My struggle diminishes into the fire of ocean
where I would stand and stare
for worldwide happiness unto the blooming
photophobia conceal in the dark room
where stages are left and strange
my miniature will stipple the way
for love and peace fortified with all gesture
to rendezvous for long march of life


Comments about My Struggle by ramesh rai

  • Gold Star - 39,733 Points Aftab Alam Khursheed (10/17/2014 8:40:00 PM)

    My struggle is - struggle for the humanity (for worldwide happiness unto the blooming, photophobia conceal in the dark room) .. prest era is the era of voilence and at the same time the era is for non-violence..(for love and peace fortified with all gesture, to rendezvous for long march of life) very touchy poem that splashed the heart and mind with the vapor of the sea...thank you (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 18,545 Points Kumarmani Mahakul (10/17/2014 4:44:00 PM)

    My struggle diminishes in to fire of ocean, where I would stand and stare for love and peace. Wonderful expression with Godly feelings. Nice job on sharing. Awarding 10 for this. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 32,821 Points Akhtar Jawad (10/17/2014 4:36:00 PM)

    A true soldier of God is one who struggles for worldwide happiness and he should be sure of a warm welcome at the final destination where at angels are standing with garlands of love and peace. This geat poem deserves nothing less than 10. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, October 17, 2014



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