My Struggle Poem by ramesh rai

My Struggle

Rating: 5.0


My struggle diminishes into the fire of ocean
where I would stand and stare
for worldwide happiness unto the blooming
photophobia conceal in the dark room
where stages are left and strange
my miniature will stipple the way
for love and peace fortified with all gesture
to rendezvous for long march of life

Friday, October 17, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: thinking
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aftab Alam Khursheed 17 October 2014

My struggle is - struggle for the humanity (for worldwide happiness unto the blooming, photophobia conceal in the dark room) .. prest era is the era of voilence and at the same time the era is for non-violence..(for love and peace fortified with all gesture, to rendezvous for long march of life) very touchy poem that splashed the heart and mind with the vapor of the sea...thank you

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Kumarmani Mahakul 17 October 2014

My struggle diminishes in to fire of ocean, where I would stand and stare for love and peace. Wonderful expression with Godly feelings. Nice job on sharing. Awarding 10 for this.

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Akhtar Jawad 17 October 2014

A true soldier of God is one who struggles for worldwide happiness and he should be sure of a warm welcome at the final destination where at angels are standing with garlands of love and peace. This geat poem deserves nothing less than 10.

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