My Space Poem by Ernestine Northover

My Space

Rating: 4.8


You entered my space
The space that was mine alone
It was my cocoon
I felt safe there.
Then you thundered in and somehow took over.
I treasured my space, it was only for me.
You came and shook my fragile walls, shattered my peace,
Disturbed my equilibrium.
Now my space isn't my space anymore.
But you gave me something that made my space obsolete,
You gave me your love.

© Ernestine Northover

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Andrew Blakemore 21 October 2008

This is very beautiful Ernestine, written from the heart. Love, Andrew

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Melvina Germain 10 June 2007

Wow! how lovely, what a treasure you received then Ernestine. Fabulous poem Ernestine.--Melvina--

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