My Souls Talk Poem by Kranthi Pothineni

My Souls Talk

Rating: 5.0


When going is smooth
Any layman can sail
And can sing happily
What’s great about you?
Hey shaky timid soul

When earth is green
Any fake can lead
And can reap weed
What’s great in you?
Hey dusky tiny soul

When wind is right
Any dog can fight
And can win sight
What’s great in that?
Hey fusty cold soul

When sky is clear
Any bird can fly
And can flap high
What’s great in it?
Hey gusty coy soul

When things are clear
When time is right
When farm is green
When life is smooth
Any soul can shine

But it takes great
Soul, to rise high
And to sing happily
Even if life is hard
Said my soul to me

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

a soulful song on the soul...soul is put to test in hard times

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rago rago 31 May 2009

surely all soul cannot rise such high when hard times test them......... a very beautiful poem...........

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Shashendra Amalshan 01 June 2009

'But it takes great Soul, to rise high And to sing happily Even if life is hard Said my soul to me' this is a very inspirational poem for me sir..cause I feel like I just started life..still 21 and feel afraid when i see the challenges that lies ahead.....I hope that life will reward me with great happiness if i rise to high...very nice poem indeed....liked it very much.. and your lines have great flow too.... best wishes with love shan

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Catrina Heart 01 June 2009

Any soul will shine when it is pure and divine.........it will fly high with the grace of God in His time...Lovely poem! 10+++

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Ashraful Musaddeq 01 June 2009

“But it takes great Soul, to rise high And to sing happily Even if life is hard Said my soul to me” These lines are very beautiful. Soul to rise high and to sing happily is the cute message of this poem from which we should learn. Nice philosophical poem on divine soul. I love the way of presentation.10+++

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Lee Crowell 05 June 2009

'when wind is right any dog can fight'... what a phrase, and now it's my new slogan another exceptional poem from a master I humbly bow to you sir and thanks for sharing this

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Eyan Desir 05 June 2009

Nice poem Great flow 10s

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Joseph Poewhit 05 June 2009

Water will fund it's level

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Kesav Easwaran 02 June 2009

souls' talk...reflective...reads good...thanks for inviting me to read this poem

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Eyan Desir 02 June 2009

Good flow plus rhymes

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