My Smile Poem by Louis Cecile

My Smile

Rating: 5.0


I can’t smile anymore

I look around waiting for the sound

True nature surrounds a moment for bliss

I still look around waiting for a sound

I can’t smile anymore

A story told in prism reveals the same omega

Striving through this saga realising we have yet to reach potential

I can’t smile anymore

Repetitive strain

Daily repetition

I seek a new high where is the astral plane

Same faces seeking new places

I can’t smile anymore

Where is the respect

They cannot see regret

Attain for what

Look for meaning when permanently forgot

I can’t smile anymore

God save me

Spirit cleanse me

Split faces reside on holy ground

Commandments of choice

Do we really listen to the voice

I can’t smile anymore

Look for happiness

Look for wealth

Look of love

We look below continue a search where there is nowhere to go

I can’t smile anymore

They are better

She is fatter

Oh you really care and ask what is the matter

I can afford

Yet still we are bored

Seek the umbilical cord

We don’t really smile anymore

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

'Do we really listen to the voice'... thats why we can't smile why boredom nicely painted tenner ~ Regards ~ niv ===== Thanks for comment on my poem Please read and comment on my poem [read a protest] ‘Ogling Orgy’… Thanks …..sorry for belated comment

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Kesav Easwaran 15 May 2010

'We look below continue a search where there is nowhere to go...' sensitive sensible words...liked the poem...the presentation poignancy and the style...10

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